Saturday, July 16, 2011

What do you think about this story i made. weird, huh?

It's a really, really rough first draft. If English is your first language, you will need to take a basic language arts course to get anywhere as a writer. There are issues with grammar, word choice and sentence structure. For instance, verb tense should agree throughout your story, unless it is clear that a character is speaking, thinking or fantasizing. Second, who wants to read about what Hugo almost did or couldn't do? If you're going to write about Hugo, tell us what he did and show us through the action what is going on.

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